FIVE STARS! I adored this Loose-ID “Fling,” and think the affair between Isabelle and Daniel is exciting and loving. The two are extremely sexual, well developed, and interesting. The book moves quickly but with none of the logic flaws and jumpy emotions that plague many short stories. Readers know just how and why Isabelle and Daniel behave as they do and can appreciate the couple’s actions and reactions. The dialogue remains well constructed even as the two experience a 100 year old break in American English. Now onto the sex…Wake Me Up is so hot and the sex so well written it truly makes the book sensational. The introduction of BDSM was outstanding and set up the rest of the thrilling sex scenes. Some pages got a real quick re-read then it was off for a two mile run to release some frustration. Wake Me Up has everything I want in a story and I am waiting for Ms. Willows’ next book. ~Anya Khan, Just Erotic Romance Reviews
FIVE LIPS! Caitlyn Willows is a very gifted author and I’d place my money on Wake Me Up being one of her best pieces yet. The emotion and intensity of the love scenes truly astounded me and left me reveling in her talent. Wake Me Up is easily one of, it not, the hottest book that I’ve read this year. Daniel is a master of eroticism and his command of Isabelle’s desire left me wanting to hook my vibrator up to a car battery. His consideration of her feelings and her deep emotions in return made Wake Me Up a book that will stay with me long after I finished reading it. I can’t remember the last time my heart was stuck in my throat as it broke for Daniel and Isabelle, only to be put back together again. Caitlyn Willows has penned an amazing story that I know you’ll regret if you miss – it’s been hours since I finished it and I’m still warm from its heat! ~Kerin, Two Lips Reviews
4-1/2 HEARTS! Wake Me Up is a fascinating short story. It is not for readers who object to the BDSM lifestyle; the erotic, incredible sexual activities include flogging. Isabelle and Daniel are fabulous characters who have amazing sex. I was totally enthralled. The wonderfully written story had characters from different times who were desperately in love with each other. There were no secondary characters, but they were unneeded. The story had twists and turns that were fun to follow and did not take away from this love story. I highly recommend this wonderful story. ~Marcy Arbitman, The Romance Studio
FOUR ANGELS! Wake Me Up was an absolutely delightful story. I loved the way that Caitlyn Willows tied even the most insignificant of details together. Isabelle and Daniel were together a very short time, but their chemistry was dynamic and sizzling. If you’re looking for the intrigue of time travel and the edginess of light bondage, flogging and some anal sex, Wake Me Up is just what your libido ordered. ~Bella, Fallen Angel Reviews
Excerpt
Isabelle
stepped into her nest as she skimmed her hands down her body. It wasn’t
perfect, but it would do...as long as she stayed out of sun without skin protection...and
didn’t make sweets and junk food her primary diet. The last thing she needed was
to have her hourglass figure morph into the size and color of a cherry red
tomato. She might have more sand in her hourglass than some women, but at least
she was mindful of how quickly that sand could shift.
Sitting
cross-legged on the quilt, she crinkled open the brown paper bag that contained
the items for the spell. The shop owner had been very specific that she not
view the contents of the spell kit until she was ready to cast the spell. She
then provided Isabelle with a list of other items to gather and placed the kit
in her hands...but only after she’d extracted Isabelle’s promise to not peek
into the kit. Now her heart thudded with excitement as she looked inside and
found a white pillar candle, a bag of sea salt, a small box of matches, a
packet of herbs, two small vials -- one green, one blue -- and handwritten
instructions on thick yellow-brown parchment. Breath held, Isabelle reverently
pulled the paper out. It was crisp and cool in her fingers. The edges were
ragged and burned as if the page had come from an ancient book. She knew that
wasn’t possible since the wording for her spell had been written at the top. Light
cast shadows over the old-fashioned script and she smiled. The bold strokes
were clearly written with a fountain pen.
Quill and
ink.
She glanced
around, unsure if she’d thought that or if the words pushed into her head from
another source. She shrugged away the feeling of being watched. In all the
years she’d been coming here, she’d never seen another soul, except the man who
cared for the lawn. Back to the spell.
“It is
important to conduct your casting at precisely midnight
on the night of a clear, full moon. Failure to do so could result in the spell
going awry. On the off chance the spell does execute despite any errors, the
events will be short-term and negate further attempts at casting. Connect the
votive candles by sprinkling a solid line of sea salt between each one,” she
read aloud. “This will make your circle complete. Now light the candles. It is
important to not leave the circle during your casting. If you must do so, clear
a gentle path for yourself and then re-close it when you return. Much like a
room, one cannot leave the circle without properly opening and closing the
door.”
That made sense.
Isabelle
weighed the bag in her hand a second or two, then poured the salt as directed.
After lighting the eight candles, she picked up the instructions.
“Empty the herb
packet into your bowl. Add enough water to create a thin paste. Let it steep
while you continue with remaining preparations.”
She frowned.
Didn’t steeping indicate the water needed to be boiled first? The instructions
said nothing about hot water, and the shop owner told her to take along an
unopened bottle of spring water. Isabelle also didn’t have anything other than
her finger to stir the mixture. There was old silverware in the kitchen. She
could use one of those spoons.
She scrambled
to her feet to fetch one, then jerked herself back just in time. Leaving the
circle without opening a “door” was a no-no.
Isabelle
scanned her work thus far and decided her finger would suffice. She dumped the
mix into her bowl, stifling a sneeze by pinching the bridge of her nose as
particles drifted into her nostrils. The leaves soaked up the water instantly.
No stirring required.
“Cool.” She
dared a sniff. Mint wove a spell of its own around her.
“Open the green
vial and rub oil thoroughly over all parts of your body that you are able to
reach, ensuring extra care is given to all your erogenous zones.”
Her watch beeped.
She unlatched it from her wrist and placed it beside her. Less than five
minutes before midnight was here.
Isabelle smeared oil down her neck, over and under her arms and legs, over her
breasts, her stomach, her hips...and, lastly, her pussy. The excess on her
hands she managed to wipe on her lower back. As she set the empty vial aside, a
rush of warmth dusted over her skin, quickly followed by a tingly sensation in
her nipples and clit. Both were hard and getting more so with every second.
She pressed her
fingertips to her pussy to ease the sensation. It only made things worse. Isabelle
jerked her hand free, crossed her legs, and snatched up the instructions.
“Rub the oil
from the blue vial over the pillar candle. When sufficiently covered, insert
it... You’ve got to be joking.”
Isabelle picked
up the candle and began to wonder if she hadn’t been screwed out of twenty
dollars. Now she knew one of the reasons why the shop owner wanted her to wait
to open the kit.
Well, she’d had
worse things up her cunt before. That frozen hot dog she’d tried once was an
experience she never wanted to repeat. Isabelle thought it’d never thaw enough
to pull out -- much worse than getting one’s tongue stuck on a metal ice cube
tray. In any event, she was now beginning to ache so bad down there she needed
relief of some kind. If she was screwed, she might as well get some enjoyment
out of it.
She dutifully
rubbed oil over the length, mesmerized by the feel of slick combined with hard,
the cool that changed to warm. Her thoughts drifted into lascivious pursuits,
fantasies dreamed of but never fulfilled, disappointment in lovers coupled with
hope she’d one day get things right. It was her fault, they’d claimed. One part
of Isabelle believed that, while another rationalized that since she could get
herself off just fine, perhaps the fault was theirs.
Blood thrummed
in her veins. A draft hardened her nipples. Her clitoris swelled while her
pussy begged for the makeshift dildo inside it. When she’d emptied the vial of
the last drop, Isabelle stretched back, thighs wide, and slid the candle
against her crotch. Her labia grabbed it and sucked it deep inside. Her clit
kissed the surface in what felt like little sucks. Contractions rippled inside
her cunt, tightening and releasing in hope of an orgasm to clutch around the
hard surface.
Impossible as
it sounded, it felt like the candle was reshaping itself to conform to her
needs. It filled her vagina, nudged her clitoris -- it took control.
Lost in the wonder,
Isabelle pressed her fingers over her clitoris and tossed her other arm over her head. Her
fingers smacked against the parchment, reminding her of the instructions. She
fumbled for the paper while she flashed mad circles over her slick clit.
Drain water
from herbs into glass. Fill with water. At the first stroke of midnight, drink it all.
Isabelle
crumpled the paper in her fist as orgasm seized her. It rolled through her like
a giant wave. Her pussy muscles clamped down so hard on the candle, she knew
she’d find marks on it when she finally pulled it out. She sagged into the
quilt as the sensation eased from her. Somehow she forced herself to continue
the spell. She left the candle in place -- at this point she wasn’t sure she
ever wanted to remove the heavenly wonder. Her arms felt like noodles as she
forced them to work, draining the herb concoction into her bottle.
Thumb over the top,
she gave it a shake. The contents now shimmered like gold dust in the
candlelight. She brought the top to her lips and waited. With the first beep of
her watch signaling midnight, Isabelle chugged the contents...and tried her
best not to spit it back out. Gone was the pleasant scent of mint. The
concoction now tasted like...
“God, I hate
licorice!”
She tossed the
bottle away and wiped the back of her hand over her mouth. Don’t throw up.
Don’t throw up.
The plastic
clattered to the floor. She’d breached the circle.
“Aw, shit.”
Isabelle
flopped back onto the quilt. The room spun around her, her stomach did
flip-flops. She focused on the window, how the moonlight slanted shadows into
the room. Another mistake slammed into her -- she’d forgotten to account for
daylight savings time. Technically, it wasn’t midnight.
It was...
Her body
tightened again of its own volition, rolling her through another mind-bending
orgasm. She fisted the quilt beneath her, thrusting her hips up to capture the
moment.

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